|Black screen||BBC News report|
|Empty house, cinematic shots of items in the house that give the audience a clue to the family. For example, child toys scattered on the floor. We do not reveal any persons.||Fathers Voice over|
|Cuts unexpectedly to slow motions sliding shots & close ups of the youngest son playing and laughter. Emphasising the child’s happiness||Father starts to talk about more depressing subjects. Which will be a contrast to the images being shown.
– Also sounds of laughter
|Finally, we reveal the father with his son on his lap. The father has a very serious face while his son is optimistic about the world.
Cuts to black to a photo the family took off their house back in Syria. This gives the audience an idea on how different life is. This then leads to credits.
|Voice over with hope of a promising future.
Updated Shooting script
|Blank screen||News report on the situation in Daraa, Syria is heard.|
|Image of the empty living room in which the family live in the UK. You see the Syrian freedom flag and other household items (Wide-angel shot/ Close-ups)The youngest son Omar is seen playing with his toys in the living room. (Some medium close-ups/ P.O.V’s)||Father begins talking about their life in Daraa and the horrible things they saw.|
|Cuts unexpectedly to slow motions sliding shots & close ups of the youngest son playing and laughter. Emphasizing the child’s happinessOmar is shown looking at his work and certificates he has gotten in the short time he has lived in the UK. (P.O.V shot)||Father mentions how his son learnt to adapt to life in the UK quickly as he is the youngest. There is a contrast , as the image is happy and he is talking about a serious topic.|
|Image of Omar outside having fun. You see him running in slow motion. ( shot using slider) Pictures of the families house in Syria is shown to give a contrast.||Continue talking about their arrival in the UK and how they felt freedom to be away from the danger. Father feels he can continue his dream of his children having education and opportunities in life.|
|Omar and his father are seen together. Identity of the speaker is revealed. The father has a very serious face while his son is optimistic about the world.||No sound|
Shooting script needed to give us a rough idea on how the video may look, it is like a written storyboard.